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    Inspiration is from Bxds work. I am still inspired by his work and I intend to get on his level and higher.

    Official tags thread: https://www.rune-server.ee/showthread.php?t=646467

    I produced this: I will still work on it, but I decided to stop for now.



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    The inspiration is from this piece: No doubt hes a master with glowing and his is better indeed



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    I mean it's nice but looks incomplete

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    Its alright as of right now, but im sure you can put a lot more time and effort to it.

    Here's a few point you can fix (in my opinion) :
    The glow on her hands is too much, maybe try to reduce a tiny bit and fade it more so that it doesnt look just like a line

    Try to focus on one point, and get the idea of lines out of your head and focus more on how the light react with everything, that way it will feel more natural.


    Since its very dark, i suggest putting a photofilter or something to make the bright part stand out more. Something like bxds did.

    Add more yellow and red maybe? Just a tiny bit.

    Hope this can help you.
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    Yeah appreciate the feedback. I shouldn't have posted, which is a mistake from me.

    This piece is being worked on as we speak.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Slyther View Post
    Yeah appreciate the feedback. I shouldn't have posted, which is a mistake from me.

    This piece is being worked on as we speak.
    If you need help you can always message me, i know i might look noob, but i can guarantee you that i'm not
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    Updated:

    Some credits go to Sytrix for en lighting me about lighting.

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    The glow outline of the hands, horns and the lava rocks on the helmet aren't detailed enough. The glow on the left shoulder is quite nice, use that more in the piece.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 4usq View Post
    The glow outline of the hands, horns and the lava rocks on the helmet aren't detailed enough. The glow on the left shoulder is quite nice, use that more in the piece.
    Ahh I see. I tend to be paranoid about whether i'm over doing something or not sometimes.

    Will update it tomoro when I wake up.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Slyther View Post
    Ahh I see. I tend to be paranoid about whether i'm over doing something or not sometimes.

    Will update it tomoro when I wake up.

    I do have to say I Saw the inspiration piece without reading and was like... Dam that is sick. Then read it. If you can figure out that glow.. you will be all set.

    Excellent work as always
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