Why is it that everyone keeps self-proclaiming they're #1 at something when they clearly aren't?
Why is it that you just stuffed all the screenshot links there instead of putting them in image tags? It's highly inconvenient to look at them. Besides, the ones I bothered to click weren't very appealing. They did however show what they intended to show I suppose, so maybe this is a subjective matter.
What does 100% customs mean? Are all the items used custom?
There are many things to put fingers on here; I'm not trying to be rude or offensive, just throwing my impression out here as constructive criticism.
Some recommendations from me to improve the overall quality:
- Make sure to use as proper grammar as possible, as that will make you look more serious. (Personally that is a thing I care about when I check something out. I also believe that even though a lot of people don't really think of it, it makes an impression on them)
- The website itself isn't very informative and the information is rather vague. There are also some bold statements; "We have so much content that Jagex will start worrying soon!". No they won't. Seriously doubt they worry about a single private server. If they do, they shut them down. Personally I think it's better to be more humble and realistic; don't exaggerate what you have. If you give people high expectations, and don't deliver, it will be a bad experience for the player.
- Personally I also prefer a website that is consistent; meaning every page has the same design and navigation. Looks more natural, and is less confusing to the end user.
I also looked at the store; the impression I got is that you're throwing up a server, trying to grab some quick cash while it lasts. This can be said about a lot of servers around, and I never join a single one of them. I guess this is a subjective matter as well, but it's something to take into consideration. You need to know why you do the things you do, and consider the pros and cons with your choices.
And lastly; I wish you good luck with the server!