Hello. Here is a comparison between the jargon your wrote up and my introduction write-up for my advertisement thread for RuneZ back in 2013.
Yours
MineThe world has been engulfed by a Deadly virus, however, you, a 'survivor',
YoursRuneZ takes RuneScape Private Servers to a whole new level of creativity. The world has been engulfed by a zombie apocalypse, however, you, a 'survivor',
Minemust take out as many mutated Zombies that roam through towns & cities, getting in your way of the precious items that you need to survive.
Yourswash upon the shore of this God forsaken world. Zombies roam through towns & cities, getting in your way of the precious items that you need to survive.
MineItems can be found in random crates, chests, and even the rare weapon racks That randomly spawn throughout the World,
YoursItems can be found in houses, shops, banks, barracks, fortresses, or anywhere with a door to get into, or a ladder to climb up to.
MineYou need essentials to survive. You need water. As time passes, you start to get thirsty and must find anything that will keep you alive.
You need essentials to survive. You need food, and you need water. As time passes, you start to get hungry, and thirsty.
Yours
MineYou have to loot to find food, water, weapons, and armor to protect yourself from the vicious Mutants,
YoursYou have to pillage villages to find food, weapons, and armor to protect yourself from the vicious zombies.
MineHowever,
Yours...but...
MineYour not the Only Survivor, There is others. They may be friendly, and they may be Dangerous.
YoursThere are other survivors, trying to live through this Hell. And they may be friendly, and they may not be.
MinePlayers are what makes this server interesting, the more players the more bone chilling expense`s and in my opinion no one can be trusted as the most valuable loot is The most rare and many Players will do anything to get there hands on it!
Did you just take a thesaurus to a few words and call it your own? Besides, I suck at writing.At any given moment, another survivor can jump out of the shadows, and kill you for ALL of your items. If you do die... if you fail to survive... you will be given the chance to start again, at the cost of combat levels being reset.






