The login box doesn't fit the background at all. The glow surrounding it makes it even worse. IS this an RSPS (RPG) that we're playing or some futuristic shit? Try to find unity in your work, look at other servers perhaps to gather some ideas.
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Hey so here is my new login screen any suggestions will help
The login box doesn't fit the background at all. The glow surrounding it makes it even worse. IS this an RSPS (RPG) that we're playing or some futuristic shit? Try to find unity in your work, look at other servers perhaps to gather some ideas.
tf am i looking at
lacks a sense of wholeness, by using random elements within the composition and placing them in this way does not bring them together. It just looks a mess.
*logs in to rainbow torvas and 30 staff ranks*
ot: doesn't fit the genre of rs.
semi-jokes aside, it doesn't look like it really fits anywhere, feels so random, and the glossy&glowy vibe doesn't fit any revision tbh. i like the idea behind those pillars connecting to the login box, kinda holding it up, but the execution is just weird. not a fan of this at all but nobody can say that they haven't seen worse i'm sure.
Since a lot of people are kinda just saying (Doesn't fit, Take a design class etc) I'm going to attempt to give you genuine feedback.
The black stroke around Faldora is too strong, try removing the stroke and using a drop shadow with 0 distance, tweak settings until correct.
The Glow on the outside of the login box should have its blending mode changed or its opacity lowered.
The Black lighting could have its opacity lowered on the bars around the login box, you could also try lowering the inner shadow on those bars and adding a drop shadow with 0 distance.
The orange in the login box doesn't fit the color scheme,
There are color theory courses on Lynda.com but here is a free video i found on youtube
Looks like I'm about to login into startrekscape with this login box, nothing at all seems to match man.
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