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    Took a few minutes to write up and think of how I wanted it to look like.

    Here's the codepen: https://codepen.io/dennisl94/pen/pqoLWY
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    Nothing against you, there's honestly nothing impressive here, just a gradient BG and plain text.

    Also, your resize of the discord logo:
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      width: 200px;
      height: 125px;
    The original art work is 1600x1600, 200x125 isnt an equal ratio. You should shrink both sides by the same %, which in this case would be the exact same amount. So anything like 1000x1000, 600x600, 300x300, 250x250; these would all work.

    Not much to critique other than that. A countdown would be nice, or transition some of the text to fade into the discord logo when hovering the area.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Noele View Post
    Nothing against you, there's honestly nothing impressive here, just a gradient BG and plain text.

    Also, your resize of the discord logo:
    Code:
      width: 200px;
      height: 125px;
    The original art work is 1600x1600, 200x125 isnt an equal ratio. You should shrink both sides by the same %, which in this case would be the exact same amount. So anything like 1000x1000, 600x600, 300x300, 250x250; these would all work.

    Not much to critique other than that. A countdown would be nice, or transition some of the text to fade into the discord logo when hovering the area.
    A countdown woul be nice indeed, I'll keep that in mind. As this is a basic template so there's not too much to go on about and it's sort of purposely done that way as well.
    I appreciate your feedback and if i'm bothered to really improve this I will considering your opinions for certain. Thanks!
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    I feel like you just keep posting the basic W3School CSS tutorials. Nothing impressive.

    edit: no offense and if you’re just learning then that’s cool. But otherwise I don’t understand why you’re sharing lol.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jordan Belfort View Post
    I feel like you just keep posting the basic W3School CSS tutorials. Nothing impressive.

    edit: no offense and if you’re just learning then that’s cool. But otherwise I don’t understand why you’re sharing lol.
    I m actually new to Web Development but I'm super happy to learn as I go along. I look for feedback and I'm sure others can learn and think of similar concepts. In no way are my work next level contents but I'm always happy to see myself improve on a casual learning basis.
    I mostly look for feedback such as Noel's
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    Quote Originally Posted by .css View Post
    I m actually new to Web Development but I'm super happy to learn as I go along. I look for feedback and I'm sure others can learn and think of similar concepts. In no way are my work next level contents but I'm always happy to see myself improve on a casual learning basis.
    I mostly look for feedback such as Noel's
    Hey no worries -- wasn't being a dick (intentionally anyway). Learning is awesome and I'm glad you've picked it up. I don't know much so I can't share any feedback as far as better code goes but keep going. Udemy offers a couple nice CSS courses for $10-15 too.
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