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    Hello Guys
    i just finished these two art
    hope u like it

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    #1 is ok.

    #2 not a big fan of this style + the blurr looks weird.
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    I like them, nice work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Unzy View Post
    I like them, nice work.
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    The first one is an interesting start. I'd consider removing the dark background behind the text and the text altogether on both pieces. Your light source complimenting that of the render's is on point, but it could be executed a little less forcefully. Try bringing in a little more effects that produce subtle light sources to spicen things up a touch.

    As for the second, I really do like the colors. The pentool work is a bit random and sort of detracts from the possibility of a natural flow. The blur is a little strong for how hard you'd erased parts of it out so it seems sort of splotchy. I'd remove the blurring layers entirely and if you're confident add a very, very soft blur to the background plain to bring your focal forward.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Thee Wolf View Post
    The first one is an interesting start. I'd consider removing the dark background behind the text and the text altogether on both pieces. Your light source complimenting that of the render's is on point, but it could be executed a little less forcefully. Try bringing in a little more effects that produce subtle light sources to spicen things up a touch.

    As for the second, I really do like the colors. The pentool work is a bit random and sort of detracts from the possibility of a natural flow. The blur is a little strong for how hard you'd erased parts of it out so it seems sort of splotchy. I'd remove the blurring layers entirely and if you're confident add a very, very soft blur to the background plain to bring your focal forward.
    Where you see pentool in this #2
    It's like sort of these light stroke renders.

    #1 amazing
    #2 crap

    Try to make more signatures, show them more!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Caelum. View Post
    Where you see pentool in this #2
    It's like sort of these light stroke renders.

    #1 amazing
    #2 crap

    Try to make more signatures, show them more!!
    Riddled throughout. Those curves are almost too estranged to not be pentool. Here's an example. Those sort of sharp points and smoother archs are near impossible to get by hand.
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