Thread: My recent work showcase - OneDayGFX

some pretty decent work you got there mate, keep it up for sure.
I personally like the AURELIUS one out of the bunch the most.

Logos look nice. Badges have no background, which makes them look dull. Banner is really nice, but the animations are meh. I'd recommend changing the background as you change the text and to change the effect as it becomes very repetitive.

Looks decent, Keep it up

Thanks for the feedback, added a new banner I just made.

Sorry I'm a little late getting to this man! I've been pretty busy so I've almost neglected your showcase here lol.

You can see the improvement you've made in your work from the time I last browsed at your store. I can't say much about your animated banners other than to work on your contrast a bit. Your text could have fit better in maybe a neutral color, or some type of shadow behind it to separate it some more from the background. Try not to go overboard on text of that size as well, a simple gradient can go a long way.

The logos -
1) Abyss and Zonica both have a huge space either at the top, or the bottom, that doesn't seem to really add much to the design, I think both would be better trimmed to fit the text height more.
2) I notice in most all of your logos you have a bit of choppiness on your emboss, which means your depth is set too high. Bring that down to the point where those choppy areas aren't seen and you'll have a much cleaner piece.

I think I'll just start there. I really can't wait to see more from you. Good work, man.

Originally Posted by Chance

Sorry I'm a little late getting to this man! I've been pretty busy so I've almost neglected your showcase here lol.

You can see the improvement you've made in your work from the time I last browsed at your store. I can't say much about your animated banners other than to work on your contrast a bit. Your text could have fit better in maybe a neutral color, or some type of shadow behind it to separate it some more from the background. Try not to go overboard on text of that size as well, a simple gradient can go a long way.

The logos -
1) Abyss and Zonica both have a huge space either at the top, or the bottom, that doesn't seem to really add much to the design, I think both would be better trimmed to fit the text height more.
2) I notice in most all of your logos you have a bit of choppiness on your emboss, which means your depth is set too high. Bring that down to the point where those choppy areas aren't seen and you'll have a much cleaner piece.

I think I'll just start there. I really can't wait to see more from you. Good work, man.

Thanks for your constructive feedback, I appreciate your words.
Also added a new banner from today in the thread

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