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    *Note: Background isn't made by me and it's purpose is to showcase the logo*

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    The text looks great! However, I would seriously focus more on how you texture/detail your shapes. For example, the background/texture of the shape makes the text difficult to read, if the background was darker and the border of the shape was lighter that would make it fit a lot better. I would try to look at someone like Chance or Calum's designs since they often use borders with their logos and see how they balance the colors and how they use textures. Your pen tooling is solid though, gj! Keep it up boiii
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    It's nice, but I agree with Nikolas that the text is a bit difficult to read.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nikolas RSPS View Post
    The text looks great! However, I would seriously focus more on how you texture/detail your shapes. For example, the background/texture of the shape makes the text difficult to read, if the background was darker and the border of the shape was lighter that would make it fit a lot better. I would try to look at someone like Chance or Calum's designs since they often use borders with their logos and see how they balance the colors and how they use textures. Your pen tooling is solid though, gj! Keep it up boiii


    Quote Originally Posted by Jigsaw View Post
    It's nice, but I agree with Nikolas that the text is a bit difficult to read.

    Thank you for the feedback, appreciate it. Calum did mention the same about making the background of text darker. I'll update the thread with the newer version once it's finished.

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    Had a bit of fun editing this one with you on Discord earlier with some of my edits; hope the feedback on discord was helpful too. Sometimes it's easier to illustrate the edits than trying to communicate them

    Personally, I would have taken it in this direction (keeping the same shape/text).


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    Quote Originally Posted by gfxdistrict View Post
    Had a bit of fun editing this one with you on Discord earlier with some of my edits; hope the feedback on discord was helpful too. Sometimes it's easier to illustrate the edits than trying to communicate them

    Personally, I would have taken it in this direction (keeping the same shape/text).
    Once again would like to thank you for the effort and editing the design.
    Appreciate it.

    I have decided to adjust it to this


    I think this would be the best outcome while still maintaining the edits that have been done on the design.
    I want to thank everyone again for giving me feedback and help. I'll take all those things in consideration into my future designs.
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    Work on your lighting comp. You're missing out on a great opportunity to move this peice up a few levels. The pink/purple glowing lines haven't created any reflected lighting onto the text which they should. I know it's hard o create it w/your colour choices but it's gotta be done.


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    Quote Originally Posted by TheeeRash View Post
    Work on your lighting comp. You're missing out on a great opportunity to move this peice up a few levels. The pink/purple glowing lines haven't created any reflected lighting onto the text which they should. I know it's hard o create it w/your colour choices but it's gotta be done.
    Hoho. You hit the mark, great insight. Thank you, this will be useful for future projects.
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