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Looks good, nice work.
What type of game is this even for? Also, I think if you're going to make the W central to the logo, it should definitely be emphasized more than the other letters through the design.
Looks really good man
I think it would've looked cooler if the "online" wasn't 3D as well
I gotta say, by far not your best work. The shaping on the type isn't matched correctly (look at the bottom of the A's), the dots on the I seem like they could've been executed a lot better, maybe as a diamond shape, or at least on the bottom of them, using the same path as your central stroke.
The 3D effect also seems like it would look a lot better on a thicker design, while yours is kinda thin and everything seems lost and unnecessary.
The dirty gray background on your presentation also looks really thrown together.
Regardless, keep it up and keep showing work, but this should've definitely had more work in it. :P