wow that looks really sick, love to know how you did that
Add me in discord if you don't mind: Herb#7084
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decided to try something cool
Spoiler for original:
if anyone wants to see the process
Spoiler for background:
Spoiler for the hunter:
Spoiler for the hunted:
Spoiler for the hunted adjustments:
Spoiler for butterflies!:
cnc is very much appreciated
wow that looks really sick, love to know how you did that
Add me in discord if you don't mind: Herb#7084
beautiful
Nicely done. I'll break some things down.
• Glows/lightsources are typically radial unless obstructed. Your leading focal draws a straight edge which looks a bit awkward. https://i.imgur.com/fkXcJ7v.png
• The contrast is a touch dialed up too high, adding a little too much darkness to a lot of areas. The butterflies for example are almost entirely blacked out. Lightening those areas up a bit emphasizing a light source from the light source would be wicked.
• The blue/orange contrast is often overdone. It would be neat to see the introduction of some other colors here, maybe using the butterflies as means to do so.
• The "hunter" feels flat, though that's the downside of the contrast issues throughout. Considered darkening him a bit, which will also act to bring him forward and define his features.
• Experiment with depth a little more. There's always room for improvement, with this being no exception. There's some serious potential to really add some here.
• Adding a few more of the sparks and trails from the butterflies could really make for some great atmosphere.
In short, great concept, but the execution is a touch lacking. For what it's worth though, I really like where this piece is headed, but it feels like it's 70% done or so.
I don't know much about graphics so I can't give any constructive criticism,
But I do really like what you have done here so good work.
Thank you very much, the random blue spot seemed to have been caused by an early version of the colour dodge overlay, so I fixed that up. Depth is something I completely forgot which is bad, I'll work on that. I'm going to try a different colour for the butterflies.
Thank you everyone else for the kind comments.
Taking in Wolf's feedback, I made some adjustments to it which I hope makes it a little better, seen in the main post
Made the light source at the back shine a bit more off hunter and increased the opacity of him (I had two layers, so I increased the one on top). Tried playing with Gaussian blur to bring out the subjects more in the hopes of creating depth. Also made the butterflies more colourful.
Sick work buddy, I really like the colors migration.
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