Much better! maybe make some more time for the viewer to read the text and then rather speedup ur transitions where it says join now and Nitro. kiu
Just like the last one I gave it another shot tried out some new colours and new techniques, let me know what you think! tried to incorporate some rsps things too (just like the last I would appreciate a rating out of 10 )
1) Very blinding yellow, and the brownish color you got on your arrow container to the left is a little dirty. I'd clean it up with fresher colors, for sure.
2) Being an advertisement, do not put sentences in your banner. Short and to the point is the best way to do this. Also, your text blends with the background far too well and is very tiny. In terms of your content, I feel you are portraying this in the same way as a thread layout, which is not the case.
3) Your container to the left is also very small and doesn't give much breathing room for your text within. It makes the banner look a little uncomfortable.
4) When I said gradients, I didn't mean a gradient text effect, though it is a nice little touch haha. Turn your solid colors into gradients, add some more umph.
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