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    So I know I said I was done because I was preparing for uni but I came across someones gfx shop and it got me all creative so I tried to make an advertisement thread for a fake server please let me know what you think and leave suggestions for improvements ( a rating out of 10 would be much appreciated, 10 being the best :P )

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    It seems that it's too slow. I'd give it a 6/10 being honest, the ad itself is not bad just the pacing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by arham 4 View Post
    It seems that it's too slow. I'd give it a 6/10 being honest, the ad itself is not bad just the pacing.
    When making it on adobe photoshop it felt very choppy and slow already I was worried it was gonna be slower then this. thank you for your input much appreciated!
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    To be honest it doesn't look like an advertisement for a rsps
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    I suggest setting the time to no delay for the transitions, it will look much smoother. Also you gotta start experimenting with layer styles my dude.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tousuki View Post
    I suggest setting the time to no delay for the transitions, it will look much smoother. Also you gotta start experimenting with layer styles my dude.
    everything is on no delay besides some stuff, but thats for people to have time to read it :P and i've been told that I tried using emboss but I guess it didn't show at all lol

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    To be honest it doesn't look like an advertisement for a rsps
    I guess your right it's missing a few things that make it rsps themed guess I missed out on that, thanks for your input
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    needs to be flashy with colours and words screaming at you, it needs to get the attention of the people who are seing the ad. This one is too slow and plain.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mtarik View Post
    everything is on no delay besides some stuff, but thats for people to have time to read it :P and i've been told that I tried using emboss but I guess it didn't show at all lol



    I guess your right it's missing a few things that make it rsps themed guess I missed out on that, thanks for your input
    Oh I mostly meant for the sliding arrow thing, sorry didn't notice the rest on my phone. You can do with or without bevel and emboss, it's all about how you use it. Like Isak said you gotta make stuff pop more, sticking to two tones of colour doesn't help. Making the text presentable using either some light b&e and adjusting the highlight/shadow with some subtle outer glow. Use of textures, patterns or background will help, use stock images and resize them. It hard to put into words, much easier to show. Although photoshop is very limited in terms of animation compared to After Effects, you can still make it as clean and attention-drawing if you experiment a lot with layer styles and colour correctness.
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    Ignore the fact it doesn't fit the rsps theme, as I think it's been pointed out enough.
    Play with some smooth gradients. There's plenty more I could suggest, but take it one step at a time. Your progress is nice.
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