Gonna go off of the first one for some CnC.
I like the background effects, tbh. They add a lot.
The tattoos added on her arms are coming off pretty sharp. Has some hard edges that need to be smoothed out because it just strikes my eye as a focal point almost which shouldn't be the case.
The blur effect coming off the eyes I believe could've been better executed as well. While the idea behind this photo manip isn't exactly "natural", you still want it to come across as natural as possible and those blurs make it obvious that it isn't. Perhaps take those blurs, trace them with the pen tool and turn that blurred effect into something straight edge and make it come across as like a face tattoo/face paint. Then you can add some subtle blurs on that to show a glow/vibration effect happening.
I don't know, just an idea lol. Good work though.
kiu.