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    This is my last practice for cover pages. I'll be designing full websites now as I feel i've practiced enough from designing to animations to get myself started.

    Also i'll be starting my uni course in 2 days. Aiming to be the top of my class

    I also have an Instagram for my design work: https://www.instagram.com/ashhab.designs/

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    Looks great, good luck with university.


     

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    The title text depth isn't right, the "raining" is behind the astronaut where the "t" is in front, you'd need to make the "t" go behind the right leg but still in-front of the left leg for them to look on the same depth. Alternatively bring the "r" forward and just have the text over the top of the astronaut would also work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Greg View Post
    The title text depth isn't right, the "raining" is behind the astronaut where the "t" is in front, you'd need to make the "t" go behind the right leg but still in-front of the left leg for them to look on the same depth. Alternatively bring the "r" forward and just have the text over the top of the astronaut would also work.
    Thanks for the feedback, hows this: Trying to get it right atm.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Slyther View Post
    Thanks for the feedback, hows this: Trying to get it right atm.
    That looks better. GJ!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Slyther View Post
    Thanks for the feedback, hows this: Trying to get it right atm.

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    Yeah it looks better, hard though cause the leg is so wide it covers a lot of the text.
    You could shrink and move him left slightly so the right knee coverts part of the "T" and the hand covers part of the "S".
    However that'd mess up the proportions of having him big of the left and the worm whole small on the right
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    The design is great, but the UX side of it all is lacking. The background is pretty busy and the text simply just sitting on top of it causes a busy-ness with the user's eyes. It's just all in all hard for my eyes to be attracted towards what the site's main objective is - clicking that 'Learn More' button. These buttons are called Call to action buttons, which need to have prominence that make the user want to click on it.
    I would also recommend some sort of translucent background behind the navigation just it's more noticeable.

    tl;dr the design skill is there, now's just executing the layout better. Great work man, improvement daily.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chancee View Post
    The design is great, but the UX side of it all is lacking. The background is pretty busy and the text simply just sitting on top of it causes a busy-ness with the user's eyes. It's just all in all hard for my eyes to be attracted towards what the site's main objective is - clicking that 'Learn More' button. These buttons are called Call to action buttons, which need to have prominence that make the user want to click on it.
    I would also recommend some sort of translucent background behind the navigation just it's more noticeable.

    tl;dr the design skill is there, now's just executing the layout better. Great work man, improvement daily.
    Appreciate the solid feedback sir

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    What uni are you off to pal?
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sa1adin View Post
    What uni are you off to pal?
    ive been in the uni i am since last year, did foundation in graphics. Now switching to Interaction.

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