1, can hardly see the text at the top right
2, the big like blurr needs to go with the Cigar, and make look like that Blurr / Cloud is comming from the Render
3, get some better tuts
4, 4.8/10
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12-22-2007, 10:33 PM
Well, im still working on it, not fully done, but i need opinions. Yes, the text sucks, but just live with itand please no "i love it, 10/10" i need opinions on what you like and what you don't. And tell me what i can do to make it better.
Well: here it is:
V1.
V2:
V3:
So please, no 10/10, i need comments and what i should do to make it better.
Thanks,
Edge
1, can hardly see the text at the top right
2, the big like blurr needs to go with the Cigar, and make look like that Blurr / Cloud is comming from the Render
3, get some better tuts
4, 4.8/10
love it, the only thing that you should change is by making the text more visible, its quite hard to see
yeah, im practicing the text, not done yet.
the text makes me want to choke, the smoke you made for the cigarette is well done. i like the smudging of the BG, i'm always in love with your GFX work.
7.8/10
very nice work smudging is great! and thats some great GFX skills keep the good work up 9/10
Added v3. please rate
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