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    The colors are nice, the flow well in the piece. The text is alright, I think it could have been done better, but I would suggest removing it. There isn't really any depth in the piece, which would be a nice thing to have to increase the overall look of the piece. Try to avoid using two renders, it draws away from the main focal. It would also look a lot better if you added lighting.

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    In contrast to Rusko, I enjoy the idea of two renders. I think that you pulled that off nicely and overall its a nice piece. However, there is little to no lighting and it would be a good idea to add some of that. I actually like your text, but I would suggest moving it. But, I love your effects.
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    They were both in one picture, and I used a stock not a render
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    Quote Originally Posted by Neurotoxin View Post
    They were both in one picture, and I used a stock not a render
    In that case, to me, it looks weird. It has no focal point. It also looks like you smudged the renders into the backround to make it look better? But, I feel like it would look better here if they stood out more. The colors are nice and the overall flow is nice. Although, the text is a bad color. I kinda like the text, but it doesn't seem to relate to the piece.
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    The colours are alright, if a bit monotone.

    I feel that the use of a stock with two focals, without anything to keep focus on just one really takes away from the composition of this. The flow is also interrupted in certain areas.

    Not bad, but could use some work.


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    You've actually pulled the use of a larger focal off quite well. Right off the bat I can say that it's a must you remove the orange and purple preset filter and never use it again. It puts a huge impact on a tag as it really dulls the colors down into an unpleasant orange and purple. Your effects are pretty interesting, but they're a tad bit sloppily put onto the canvas. When doing effects near a focal, it's a good idea to avoid using soft brushes too large in size as you get this really weird soft edge that doesn't look all that great (plus it's detrimental to the strength of the focal if it sort of just softly blends into everything).
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