I'm more into planet renders and game renders.
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05-14-2011, 05:28 AM
Well i really tried something new and i think its not bad. First time this year using human renders
Tell me what can be done better
v2 :
v3:
Brandon said it was contrasted and text was not needed
Is v2 better?
I'm more into planet renders and game renders.
I like it alot
the dude is like *got a problem!****
Haha thanks so nya how would you rate this piece?
needs a whole new background which can give off a good light source.
Alright guys thanks!
I like your adding of the "lighting bar", but I find that it feels a little out of place in this tag. The focal itself doesn't have much blending qualities about it, so it feels like it wasn't stuck in until last minute, and that really isn't a good feeling. I think you have a pretty strong background at the moment, but you should try adding some stuff in the foreground to both help the render blend in as well as really amp up the "oomph" in this tag. As I mentioned before, I like your addition of the "lighting bar", but the light source itself, including the bar, feels a little wrong because of the color of your background. If you wanted to keep it like that, I think you should change the lighting to maybe a stronger orange color, kind of like the glops in your background.
With all the good cnc i have made v2
V2 looks beast.
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