Shakugan

**+Deus Ex** · 05-14-2011, 02:10 AM

v2:

What you guys think of it ?

**OpTic Lion** · 05-14-2011, 02:17 AM

Nice Job Time Shaft

**+Deus Ex** · 05-14-2011, 02:20 AM

Thank you

You spelled my name wrong >: X

**Kadachi** · 05-14-2011, 02:22 AM

Not bad, work on your FX. It seems flat atm.

**Jeffrey** · 05-14-2011, 04:46 AM

I dislike the random little text that I can't even read, haha.

Other then that, awesome job as always.

**Nya** · 05-14-2011, 04:53 AM

LowQuality.. the show was boring too >3 but still nice

**Sway** · 05-14-2011, 07:14 AM

It seems to me like you focus too much on your text and not enough on the tag itself.

**+Deus Ex** · 05-14-2011, 08:21 AM

Really good comments appreciate it all. Thanks!

**Thee Wolf** · 05-14-2011, 10:38 AM

I remember using this exact same render a very long time ago in one of my tags, haha. In your piece, your wall of miscellaneous text behind the intentional focal is very distracting and I do strongly recommend you remove it. I like your color choices between red and orange, but I think the piece could really use some work on the lighting to really bring it up as well as some blurring of the BG elements. It seems like you're still in the middle of working on this tag, man, but I do certainly like where it currently stands.

**+Deus Ex** · 05-14-2011, 11:56 AM

v2 added with more FX and text removed

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