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  1. #1 Some Work. 
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    Took me about 1 hour to finish this.



    C&C Please?
     

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    Alright, all in all I like this abit but for the flaws;
    to the right the white line and in the center of the piece, a black image, possibly a C4D gone wrong? I came across a few myself ha.
    But I also think the lighting is a bit awkward and you focused more on adding C4Ds than the focal.
     

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    Quote Originally Posted by [K]yle View Post
    Took me about 1 hour to finish this.



    C&C Please?
    ur lighting is forced o.e the ol' xxx soft brush technique
    i would like it if it wasnt so cluttered the focal is damn near closed to fhs(floating head syndrome)
     

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    Very LQ and chaotic, needs depth, as in burn/dodge tool. Lighting is forced and is too strong.

     

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    Ok. Thanks for the comments, I will try and improve next time.
     


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