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Its a Literary Analysis Essay
The Devil’s influence was strong. Later in the story as Goodman Brown gets closer to the ceremony he hears a voice that shocked him, it was his Faith. “ “Faith!” shouted Goodman Brown, in a voice of agony and desperation;” (Hawthorne (page number)). Goodman Brown screams Faiths name because he felt hurt by the fact that she would attend the ceremony. To find out that even your last hope of good can be influenced by evil is something scary. After recognizing the voice of his beloved wife Goodman Brown feels hurt and depressed. Faith being at the ceremony is ironic because she was his last bit of faith in humanity. “My Faith is gone!” (Hawthorne (Page NUmber) ).
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