The editing is decent, but maybe a little too quick and fast paced - it's almost overwhelming. Shows some parts of gameplay that are a tad uninspiring, like a character mining a rock or crafting a rune at generic locations. These are generally givens in a server and don't really need to be in the promotional video. The text describing what people are seeing is a little bland, and for things like bosses there perhaps should have been a team taking them down and getting a decent loot and so on. Overall not bad, a good start, will capture a decent amount of attention I'm sure, but we'll see.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kbjvHbZzx6g What you think?